A great find – page 1 (2)

Panacea - A great find page 1

Well, I’ve certainly added a lot of lines since the previous post. There isn’t that much changed however. I did get some great feedback and had already started redoing frames 3, 4 and 5, but I didn’t get that quite right without redoing about 1/3 of the page. For now I thought it more important to keep the pace rather than getting it completely right. So just some small changes:

  • Redid the character in frame 1
  • Restructered the background on frame 2 a bit
  • Shifted the boot in frame 4
  • Switched the grip of the hand in frame 5

I’m going to finish the remaining characters and after that leave this page alone for a bit. I’ll start on page 2 and have a fresh look at this page before inking.

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