Well, I’ve certainly added a lot of lines since the previous post. There isn’t that much changed however. I did get some great feedback and had already started redoing frames 3, 4 and 5, but I didn’t get that quite right without redoing about 1/3 of the page. For now I thought it more important to keep the pace rather than getting it completely right. So just some small changes:
- Redid the character in frame 1
- Restructered the background on frame 2 a bit
- Shifted the boot in frame 4
- Switched the grip of the hand in frame 5
I’m going to finish the remaining characters and after that leave this page alone for a bit. I’ll start on page 2 and have a fresh look at this page before inking.