Archive for May, 2011

A great find – wrap up


The final versions of the “A great find” short story. Some remarks below.

Panacea - A great find page 1
Panacea - A great find page 2
Panacea - A great find page 3
Panacea - A great find page 4

  • I got rid of the texture layers, in the end I think this looks better.
  • A lot of page 2 and 3 is pretty redundant, I could have told the same thing probably in one page, certainly within one and a half.
  • Why the hell didn’t I draw the bag in image 2 page 3?
  • Ditto for image 1 page 4. He (Maqiloh)even refers to it in what he says.
  • That text is horrible!
  • I like the look of page 4 overall
  • Changed some small things on page 3, mostly added some green, it was very bleak
  • Twice within the span of just two pages basically the same close up of a hand reaching for the bag. Tsssss
  • Overall I like page 1 still best, but those trees in image one are really too small.

A great find – page 4 (5)


Panacea - A great find page 4

I decided to finally finish the last page of “a great find” first before continuing with the “real” pages. This one has has been sitting on my harddrive for ages now without any progress. The last week I’ve spend a great number of hours to get it finished. To completely there yet, but with one extra session I should be able to finish it.